Ascension Part 1 - Collective Review

[Vaan Shepard]

Congratulations everyone, you made it through part 1 of Ascension. There will be a two week break before part 2 begins, gives everyone time to stretch their legs a bit -though if I feel like site activity is dying I will launch it sooner-.

In the meantime, I am doing some review collecting. I would like some people to give their thoughts on what is going on now, it'll help me reshape part 2 to help accommodate the other players.

I do have some rules and such for those who place a review here, you are required to list at least 1 strong point and one weak point of the story. At least one of each, you can do a lot of good and one bad or a lot of bad and one good, but you have to list at least one.

It doesn't have to be parts you hate or were bad if you can't think of any, it could be just some certain plot points you were confused about and such - or a lack of involvement you would like changed for part 2.

You don't have to be terribly detailed, just something more than 'its good'.

[Lea]

Hmmm......

I really liked all of it, I need to come up with something bad, hmmm....

Specific good points, I liked the twists and turns, I loved the storyline and the persistent sense of suspense. Vaan's character is an interesting one that wants me to know more about him.

Bad points, bad points..... some spots didn't flow as smoothly as they could, but it's difficult for that to happen in an RP where it's not just the writer of the plot who's responsible for story flow.

[Namine Joy LeBeau]

Good points - Plot twists, love being thrown for a loop~

Bad points - *dead pans* Sometimes I just had no idea what the hell was going on.

Although, I was very glad I could turn to Mike for help~ He made a lot of confusion turn into "oooooooooooooooooooh" *facepalms* moments~

Over all I did enjoy this thus far~<3